FlashFic: The Storm

The Storm, flash fiction by JC Rosen

Photo by Mike McCune

The static levels were too high. The hairs on his arm not only stood on end, they vibrated. Something was coming. 

Robert manned the little weather station alone. The meters fluttered then stood in the red zones. He frowned. Cold logic told him it was impossible. It told him there was some explanation. It told him to sound the alarm. He froze until sheer panic slammed the alarm blaring. He felt more than heard the oncoming storm. Storm? He never saw readings like this before.

He ran to the window in the cinder block wall. The thick cloud in the distance made his hands shake. It was viciously dark. Like a buzzing, snapping beast, it ate its way over the horizon. Tendrils reached down, each ending in an explosion of damage as it reached the ground. The carnage was hideously precise. The city, destroyed. Suburbs, gone. His own town, shattered in a whirlwind of dark lightning. Each exploding, drawn up and spit out as the heartless cloud moved closer.

The thin remainder of cold logic told Robert he had to warn others, people the alarm wouldn’t reach. The equipment was smoking. He grabbed the phone. Crackling made him flinch before a shock threw him across the room. He slammed against the wall and crumpled, arm shooting pain to its shoulder. Biting his cheek, he dragged himself across the floor and up using a chair. Back to the window, arm hanging useless. Every muscle reverberated. The machines popped and sizzled. Get out, they said. It’s coming, get out.

He darted from the building. Run, logic said. No, not the car, electronics won’t work in this storm. In this thing. He made the mistake of looking up. The sight stopped him in his tracks. The cloud blotted out the sunny day, spreading across the sky. The onrushing sound was deafening. The pressure began to crush him. It shocked him into moving again. Running. Running away from the weather station. Running toward nothing.

Robert’s entire body quivered, throbbing, his arm a mute screech of pain. He cried out, the sound echoing in his head. The explosion threw him off his feet. He landed amid broken cinder blocks and a tire that rolled on its rim. A flash of time to marvel he survived. Enough time to ache and roll over.  Time to shriek as a thin, dark streak of lightning speared him.

It lifted him up. It held him fast, his body stiff. Pain screamed through him. It was abruptly shut down. Everything was shut down. The lightning dropped him. It moved on. It took the fear and pain away. It took Robert away. What was left rose awkwardly. It slammed its shoulder into its socket. It began to walk along with the broadening darkness, pausing while the creature above destroyed the amusement park, stopping while the creature exploded the little town beyond it.

Others were stabbed by the dark lightning. They were lifted, dropped to the ground. They stumbled out of the wreckage and joined what was left of Robert on its pilgrimage. It saw blood spurting from a damaged drone. That drone won’t last long, came a thought. A thought. A sliver of Robert hiding within tried to contact the thought. The sliver was cold logic. The sliver faltered, fearing for Robert’s brain functions under the control of the sparking, crackling creature.

The drone which was once Robert stumbled. The sliver observed the effect. It reached, experimenting. The drone stopped. It tilted its head. It resumed shambling with the cloud. The sliver grabbed and clawed. The drone fell to its knees and held its head between its hands. There was a moan deep in its throat. The sliver, now rippling and waving through pathways, forced its way into lobes, touched sensitive places, retreated when the drone spasmed. It was on the ground, twitching, hurting. Robert’s sense of self took painful hold. It heard the humming in the remaining part of the drone’s brain. It forced Robert to work past the hum.

Get up. Walk. Don’t let it know. The thoughts formed with great effort. Each one made the next easier. Each one made him more Robert. Ahead in the distance, the darkness reached down and wove a wall. The cloud poured into it, leaving daylight. Robert shuffled along with the others, stepping through and around the rubble of a small town. He peered ahead. Drones walked to the wall. It reached out and grabbed them, impaling them on black lightning and pulling them in.

There was a truck ahead on its side. Cold logic and panic combined. Robert stumbled to it and crouched in the upturned bed. Drones passed him in crowds, a horrifying, silent parade. When the last of them passed, Robert dared to peek through the cracked windshield.

The cloud became viscous, roiling shadows. They coalesced into a roaring sphere. He watched as it lifted from the dust, leaving a whirlwind behind. It shot up, soon a black dot in the clear sky.

Panic and relief overwhelmed logic. Robert lay in the dirt, whimpering and shaking as the sun set and the moon rose.

“We got a survivor over here!” Robert heard. “You’re lucky, buddy. First survivor in all these tornadoes.”

“Not a tornado,” Robert shook his head. It poured out. “Not a tornado. Not a tornado.”

“Right, buddy. Not a tornado. Don’t worry. We’ll get you patched up.” Robert felt a sharp sting in his arm. As he slumped, he heard, “Sure, not a tornado. Like anything else could do this.”

FlashFic: Mind Games

Flash Fiction by JC Rosen

Photo by idleman

The money looked good. Better than the usual chump change for volunteering as a lab rat. “Clinical depression a plus,” the listing said. Charles laughed. At least it was a plus for someone.

He got to the psych lab early. Stacey gave him the forms. He used a little poetic license. “Do you think about suicide?” He checked “often.” “Have you ever attempted suicide?” “Are you currently taking medication?” Deciding to be cautious, Charles answered no for both. What they didn’t know wouldn’t keep him from that cash.

Stacey called the next day. “You’re in. Can you make it Saturday?” He sure could.

More forms, disclaimers listing possible complications. He had his appendix out, the consent forms were the same. Scary stuff listed, but never really happened. He signed and Stacey took the clipboard, nodding as she looked them over. Pity, Charles thought. She’d be pretty with her hair down.

He fidgeted in a small room with a big mirror. Finally Stacey opened the door. Putting a pill bottle and a Coke on the table, she sat. “It’s a new anti-depressant. We can begin today. You’ll return for one dose daily for ten days.”

“Wow, it works in ten days?” He shook the pill bottle.

“We anticipate beneficial changes in brain chemistry within 48 hours,” Stacey told him. She took the bottle and dropped a capsule into his hand. He popped it, washing it down with soda.

Sleepiness hit hard that night. Charles crashed before 11:00. Before he fell asleep, he muzzily wondered if he should stop taking his usual Prozac. Waking with a start, he was more than rested. He was ready to get the day going. Weird thing was it was only 4:00. He shrugged and dove into the history assignment. An hour later, he hit PRINT. He finished the paper in an hour? This stuff was good. It was better than they said.

The extra energy helped him do calculus homework the next day, but afterward he couldn’t stop doing proofs. New ideas chased one another, leaving no room for physical coordination. He stumbled through campus to the psych lab. This stuff was great. He just had to get control of it.

In the small room, he held his head and breathed deeply. Stacey frowned and turned to the mirror. A knock on the door echoed. He listened to the rumble of a man’s voice. Stacey returned and gave him a capsule.

“We’d like you to stay for an hour this time, okay?” He nodded, his brain sloshing in his skull.

Moments after it hit his bloodstream, the medication blossomed in his mind. He smelled colors, heard the vibrations of molecules. Thoughts blasted together, drilling through his head. He didn’t feel himself fall from the chair, curl up under the table, cover his ears. He didn’t hear his own screams.

He didn’t hear Stacey. “I don’t understand. He got the placebo.”

 

FlashFic: Lost in Isolation

Lost in Isolation, flash fiction by JC Rosen

Photo by Meneer Zjeroen

As the panic rolled away, Sally wondered why she was frightened. She shrugged. It didn’t really matter. The sun was warm on her face and shade wasn’t far away. The small orchard of peach trees lay just around the path. It was a friendly orchard with generous trees. They whispered sweetness. Sally knew how to get there without slipping off the path into the Hotbeds of Desolation. The trick was to skip past them, gaze averted.

Settling in under the big tree in the third row, Sally took in the happy breeze and the fragrance of peaches. She closed her eyes just to see the sunlight filter through her eyelids, fluttering redness where it peeked between leaves. So good, this place, this moment. With a deep breath full of the strength they gave her, she got up and dusted off her backside. Time to see what other treasures this place held.

Skipping down the path, she heard voices ahead. They lay beyond a hedge. She listened a moment to the clipped, chirpy conversation. It was enough to make her skip away. Surely that was someone else’s tea party.

Unsure which path to take, Sally looked back the way she came. If she listened closely, she could hear the orchard whispering. She could go back whenever she wanted. She noticed the sides of the path to the right were dry, cracked clay and sand. No more Hotbeds. She tried walking instead of skipping. It worked – no moaning or tears waiting to drag her into the muck. As she savored the journey, sun warming her long hair, she hugged herself.

In the space of a step, the sun disappeared. She looked up for it, but the walls of the canyon blocked it. When she looked back, she no longer saw the hedge. She no longer heard the orchard’s whisper. The Very Bad Voice hissed along the canyon, the Beast trying to find her. She hugged herself more tightly and searched for a place to hide. A crevice, a boulder, some place to hide. Some place to be cornered.

The Very Bad Voice rasped its way toward her. Its fetid breath colored the air with mottled crimson and black, the Beast following in its wake. She opened her mouth to cry for help, but a screech came out, high pitched and wordless. The Beast reached out a claw and touched her cheek. She was able to shake her head away, but she could only hug herself, no matter how much she struggled. The Very Bad Voice muttered soothing lies as the Beast sharpened its claw. She tried to squirm away. She wanted to run for the hedge, turn toward the orchard. She’d skip if she had to, only let her free! Paralyzed with fear, she felt the Beast stab her with its sharp claw. Her thigh stung while the Very Bad Voice came close with its lies.

As the panic rolled away, Sally wondered why she was frightened. She shrugged. It didn’t really matter.

Life After NaNo: Making New Goals

My blog post regarding NaNo ending and making new goals is on the #amwriting site today. It’s useful whether or not you did NaNo. Goals should be reviewed as we evolve and learn more about our needs. There are five goals to kickstart the process detailed in the post.

Tips for Wrimos:

  1. Write more than 50k before you verify your word count. Many people, including our heroine, are surprised by a lower count than expected.
  2. VERIFY ASAP. Don’t wait until the last moment so you can verify with a higher count. Get your work verified early to avoid possible server lag when everyone around the world is trying to get verified, too. I’ve seen people “lose” NaNo due to server lag near midnight.

Take care,

JC

NaNoWriMo 2012 Winner

FlashFic: Too Much

JC Rosen's "Too Much" flash.

Photo by Michael Coté

Keh-tap! Keh-tap! Keh-tap! The sound hammered on his too-soft brain. He groaned and the tapping sound hesitated a second before continuing. He’d swear it was louder now. He got halfway to rolling over before catching himself on the edge of the sofa, perilously close to falling. Soft head. Sofa. Yeah, had too much again. Did he even go out this time? Didn’t matter.

The only thing that mattered was getting to the aspirin. Robin always put his stuff out on the kitchen table. He levered up and shambled to the kitchen, making old man sounds the whole way. Bless her, there they were: Rolaids, aspirin and a Coke. His remedy of choice.

The tapping continued in the living room as he waited for the goodies to do their stuff. The fact she typed while he was hungover and right next to the desk, that she didn’t even say good morning, confused him. It made his sore head hurt, so he ignored it all.

He stumbled up the stairs to the bathroom and took care of business, splashing water on his face after washing his hands. The soap made the cuts on his right hand sting. Cuts? The splashing helped. The aspirin was hitting his bloodstream, too. Yes, time for coffee. He shook the sting out of his hand as he went down the stairs. It was dreadfully quiet. No keh-tapping. Nothing. A note was propped up on the kitchen table, cliché though it was. She was never one for clichés. His stomach clenched when he picked it up.

A photo fell out. He gasped, turned it away, slowly turned it back. Robin’s pretty face, puffy and bruised. He looked between his scraped up knuckles and the photo of his battered lover. “No more,” the typed note read. “You went too far. Get help.” Not even her name, much less a “love, Robin.”

One of the bottles still held a couple fingers of bourbon. He downed them, deciding this earned him a drink or two.

Cursed NaNo Curse

The Cursed NaNo Curse, JC Rosen

Photo by Pat (Cletch) Williams

You may be aware of our heroine’s battle with the NaNo Curse each year, Dear Reader. Fighting through it in order to grab enough words is always a challenge. Over the last several years, it’s taken the form of health issues. This year is no different. I’m going to be a jittery, stoned mess for Thanksgiving tomorrow. Frankly, it sounds fun.

Usually, the NaNo Curse hits me earlier in the month. I thought it had when I was mildly ill with some back problems, but I fought through and kept writing. Both suddenly exploded the last few days.

BUT…

I’m lucky this year. I already exceeded the 50k. I won’t finish the rough draft for the novel by the end of November, but that’s okay. I’m taking a few days off NaNo to make Thanksgiving as great as possible for my sons and rest.

Cheering on all of you wrimos who are working through the holiday (or the regular days of the week for you who are outside the US). You go grab those good words. Shiny!

Happy Thanksgiving to all, US or no. May the real spirit of the holiday fill you and those you love.

Ready Or Not, Here NaNo Comes

NaNo2012

You probably know I do NaNoWriMo every year. I’m a big believer in what it can do for a writer, whether casual or professional, young or … uhm… not young.

I planned to plan this year. My goal was to approach this NaNo the way an author “should” approach a project: all plotted out with chapter / scene notes. I even expected myself to master a new-to-me piece of writing software in time. I started prepping with a song in my heart (The Pretenders – Precious).

When the song in my heart turned to non-writing difficulties, I floundered. Perhaps I should confess at this point I’ve never approached a writing project the way an author “should.” With everything else going on, I poked at my project here and there. It was easy to say I’d work on it when I had time and ability to devote attention. I managed to put together five pages of tightly typed outline before packing it in and deciding my NaNoPrep was a big fail.

Oh, and Scrivener? Bigger fail. Never got to it at all.

Frankenstorm came along and absolved me of my guilt. I’m not minimizing Sandy’s devastating effects to so many. We were blessed and the impact here was just inconvenience. I couldn’t work on the computer, therefore it was beyond my power. (See what I did there?)

Oh sure, I was frustrated. All my good intentions to pound out more prep! As I relaxed into the windy night, I remembered something important. NaNo can also be fun. What? That’s right, you heard me: FUN. For heaven’s sake, I have a general outline for each of six acts of the novel as well as those five pages of scene notes. I have my comfortable Word. Why all the agita?

I face this last day before the first long night of NaNo at ease. I’m doing some prep today, but it has only to do with creature comforts for the coming month. The more I think about past NaNos, the more I recall how much I appreciated the little things, like my fingerless gloves and knowing there was enough flavored coffee creamer, being sure there was food so my guys didn’t go Lord of the Flies on me. (I’m not kidding about the fingerless gloves. Even a cheap pair with the tips snipped off. Trust me on this.)

Is there such a thing as too much prep? Perhaps only if it saps the creative spirit from the process. Maybe NaNo2013 will find me fully prepped and yet eagerly awaiting the midnight bell. NaNo2012 has me prepped enough – but more importantly, tugging on the reins. Bring it, NaNo!